Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Library Journal Assignment: Vanessa Godden
Source Material: Book: Laurie Simmons: The Music of Regret
Objective Observations:
-Underwater Photograph
-Three nude women swimming
-The women‟s bodies are contorted
-Cool color palette
-Natural lighting
-Fast shutter speed
-One of the women is half way off the frame
-The three women form a “V” shape
How these observations lead to how you interpret the photograph:
The fluidity of movement between the water and the women creates a ballet-like/acrobatic tenor. The bodies of the women are twisted and contorted in the water with bubbles and reflections of light falling on and around the women, with nothing to ground them. The lack of gravity and unidentifiable space creates an otherworldly setting for the models. The woman on the right, who is half way off the frame, provides the expanse with a sense of endlessness. The playfulness of the movement and the “V” shape the bodies of the women form provide a sense of sensuality for the viewer.
Research:
Jan Howard describes in detail Simmons' intentions with the creation of the Water Ballet series in "Laurie Simmons: The Music of Regret". The series is based off of “the mercilessness of the sea and the bitterness of mistrust between individuals” (Howard, P. 34). The seductive nature of the water is interrupted by the mortality of the swimmers apparent through the air bubbles floating through the water. Simmons began shooting with plastic dolls through the glass of a fish tank then moved into pools with her figurines. She accidentally caught swimmers in the background of one of her shoots and decided to continue the project with real people. The rest of the project was shot using friends for models and in pools or the Caribbean sea.
Image #2: Mitra Tabrizian, Beyond the Limits, 2000
Source Material: Book: Street and Studio
Objective Observations:
-Suited men and women
-Standing in a blank space
-Holding cocktails
-Interacting with one another, but not the space around them
-Wood floors
-Off white walls
-Consistent lighting
How these observations lead to how you interpret the photograph:
The individuals in the photograph are in what resembles a bare gallery space interacting with one another, but not the space around them. Tabrizian appears to be making a commentary on the politics of the fine art community often times have nothing to do with the art itself. The people clumped into this area are all wearing dark colored business attire and gripping fancy cocktails. Each person seems to be mimicking the other in an eerily mechanical tenor. There is a falsehood in the sincerity of each persons interest in the other, which gives the group a robotic ambience.
Research:
Mitra Tabrizian is an Iranian artist currently working in London. The series Beyond the Limits is based of the politics involved in the “creative process”. She describes her subjects to have “mutantnt like qualities” and dresses them up in suits because it “suggests nothing and everything at the same time”.
Source: http://www.mitratabrizian.com/_reza.php#
Image # 3: Gillian Wearing, Self-Portrait as my Mother Jean Gregory, 2003
Source Material: Book: Street and Studio
Objective Observations:
-Black and white
-Portrait of a woman
-Vintage clothing
-Vintage hair style
-Soft smile
-Sad gaze
-The title is “Self-Portrait as my Mother Jean Gregory”
How these observations lead to how you interpret the photograph:
Based off of the title alone, perhaps Wearing has placed her own face onto a portrait of her mother in order to establish a connection between her mother and herself. The face in the photograph looks too modern to be an actual vintage print of Wearing's mother. The outlining her of eyes and around the hair line is a little odd. There is a distinctive grey outline between the woman's hair and her skin and the eyes seem to be cut and pasted onto the eerily smooth face in the photograph.
Research:
Gillian Wearing is a U.K. based artist. Self-Portrait as my Mother Jean Gregory is part of a series of family member photographs Wearing exhibited. The family members include her mother, father, brother, and uncle. Upon first glance, each image looks as if it is taken out of a family album, but with further scrutiny you recognize oddly similar features amongst each family member. Each photograph has actually been alter to place pieces of Wearing's face onto her family members faces. She mentions her fascination with the future as a child has now switched to her fascination with the past as an adult. Source:http://www.guardian.co.uk/artanddesign/2006/jul/06/art
Image # 4: Wolfgang Tillmans, Space One, 2001
Source Material: Book: Wolfgang Tillmans
Objective Observations:
-Downward Perspective
-Natural Light
-Winding staircase
-Red carpet
-One space leading to another
-Immense amount of lines pointing downward
-Vent on the left corner of the top of the stair case breaks the solid red space
-Warm color pallette
How these observations lead to how you interpret the photograph:
This is the area between a living space and the outside world. It is the staircase leading toward civilization and away from solitude. The bright light is diffused by a set of blinds or white curtain, spreading the light generously, where the stair case winds around to another level of the building. This diffused light gives the bottom of the staircase an etherial essence, as if a higher power is beckoning the viewer from the lonely, dark solitude of the apartment into the warm and inhabited outdoors.
Research:
This photograph is from a body of work entitled “New Family”, which lacks any real family but rather embodies the “familiar”. “The images appear to be half way between the world and the photographer” (Wigley, P. 150). This quote deems to be the epitome of Tillmans„ theme of an outsider looking in and an insider looking out that this particular series seems to manifest. Finding anything more substantial from this particular series becomes a test of true patience because Tillman expresses his dislike of giving the viewer too much information about his work. “Writing about photographs is a risk. The first sign of a good photograph is that it makes you want to say something about it. The second sign is that it makes whatever you say seem inadequate. The best photographs entice commentary then demean it, stimulating reaction and then cutting it off, producing noise only to extinguish it” (Wigley, P. 147).
Image # 5: Kurt Tong, In Case It Rains In Heaven
Source Material: Internet: http://www.kurttong.co.uk/#/Projects/In%20Case%20it%20Rains%20in%20Heav en/1
Objective Observations:
-Paper McDonald's meal tray
-Chinese writing on boxes and tray
-Over saturated color palette against stark black background
-The meal tray is perfectly centered
How these observations lead to how you interpret the photograph:
The fact that the McDonald's tray is paper and their is Chinese writing on the boxes and tray would suggest that these are hand made, decorative Chinese ornamentation. The black background gives the object a much more ominous tone than a white background would. The meal tray being perfectly centered, gives it presence and importance.
Research:
Kurt Tong was born in Hong Kong, but is now working out of London. The “In Case It Rains In Heave” series is about a traditional Chinese ceremony, in which family members purchase paper replicas of worldly possessions and burn them in order to pass them on to their deceased family members. The paper replicas are often very detailed and range from anything from microwaves to cell phones.
Library Journal Assignment

-using 8x10 camera for greatest tonal scale and detail -composition keeps eye moving through the photo between the barn and the snowmobiles in the front, it also shows the structure and architecture of the barn while creating an interesting composition artistically -the use of light on the most exposed side of the barn and the “junk” in the foreground brings life to a seemingly abandoned area. The images in this series began as an interest in the heritage of Michigan’s farming history and became a historical study on barns based on region and culture. The artist also hoped to appeal to those who were familiar with Michigan landscape which is dotted with these cultural landmarks throughout every part of the state. In this way the artist was very successful in not only creating a good historical background by incorporating text and photographing them to feature their architecture, but also creates timeless images that flood my mind with memories of my home state. Images such as these frequented my childhood and are captured perfectly from the seemingly abandoned building with wearing roof to the littering of old machinery in the fields.
Nicole Henderson on Richard Misrach’s Golden Gate Bridge Series, 1-26-00, 5:45PM -used a wide angle lens, landscape -sunset photography, therefore a fairly long exposure -uses a lot of negative space with a dramatic color as the focus This image is part of an extensive series of images that documents (in the exact same camera position) the Golden Gate Bridge which was seen from Misrach’s porch from his home. The images he creates vary greatly in tone, mood, and atmosphere based on the time of day and weather conditions. This image is one of the most harsh and aggressive images of the series. The use of red on an almost entirely black background (There is more detail in the book, however the scan couldn’t capture it) brings to mind the meanings of red. It makes me think this was either before or after a storm and makes me think of war or some sort of Armageddon. Perhaps if there were other colors in addition to this red splash across the black landscape it may change the tone, but the use of these two colors together is very powerful.
Nicole Henderson on Richard Misrach’s Golden Gate Bridge Series, 10-13-99, 9:19AM (Unfortunately this is a TERRIBLE scan. The original colors are much more muted and softer. The tones in the lower half are not pink but more yellow/ivory) -Again a landscape, wide angle lens used -Muted tones throughout the entire image. Very soft lines and textures I chose this image to contrast with the prior image in Misrach’s series. I decided to choose two images where you could actually not see the bridge to make a more equal comparison. This image is in fact the exact OPPOSITE of the prior image. Again you cannot see the bridge and there is no sunrise or sunset. Also the fog and clouds combine to distort and almost even completely destroy any idea of a horizon line. In fact you could almost take this image from the window of an airplane. The soft tones and lines and the textures in the clouds/fog make for a very peaceful and calming mood. In fact this image seems like something that could be almost meditative to look at. It is interesting the drastic changes that can be made from photographing the same thing for two years at different times of day and conditions.
Nicole Henderson on Douglas Levere, New York Changing Series, Mulberry and Prince Streets, 1998 (Re-photograph of Bernice Abbott’s Mulberry and Prince Streets, 1935) Abbott's Image
Monday, April 11, 2011
Melissa Tran on... Kunie Sugiura & Adam Fuss
2 analog sources:
Kunie Sugiura
“Dark Matters/Light Affairs”
University of Washington Press, 2000
Neususs, Barrow, Hagen
“Experimental Vision: The Evolution of the Photogram since 1919”
Roberts Rinehart/Denver Art Museum, 1994

· Objective Observations:
A black and white photogram. Portrait-style orientation. Cannot distinguish if it is a positive or a negative. Rain [or water] droplets that are reverberating across the surface. Many of these reverberations start to overlap and cross each other, creating a pattern across the surface of the image. A wide variety of tones.
· Subjective Thoughts:
It is because of the subject matter [the raindrops] that it is impossible to tell whether or not the image is a positive or a negative. The raindrop’s splatter is such an obscure, undefined thing to be able to distinguish of the rippling is a positive or a negative. This obscurity also blurs the lines of our vantage point as the viewer – are we looking up at the rippling, or down at it? The pattern of the droplets appear intentionally, not as if it were raining. There is a very relaxing aura to this photogram that may have to do with our association with the relaxing sound of rain falling.
· Biographical/Technical:
“Language of Echoes”, 1987
42.50x36.75inches
Adam Fuss
This image is to suggest a “scientific illustration of an atom or the solar system” or like “throwing pebbles into a pond with concentric circles rippling across the surface and colliding with one another”, as stated before I agree with the second suggestion [as is more obvious], but find it hard to believe the first suggestion, it is a bit of a stretch to make the connection to an atom or a solar system when the more obvious connection is to rippling water. I wonder if that suggestion was made by the author of the book or from the artist himself.
· Objective Observations:
A black and white image. A photogram. Portrait-style orientation. Confusing to tell if it is a negative, positive, or combination. Several squids of varying sizes were captured in this image. Soft, ethereal background – painterly.
· Subjective Thoughts:
The manner in which the photogram was arranged, allows the viewer to believe that we are either looking up from underneath the circling squids, or down from above the creatures – either way, we feel very much a part of the scene. The way that there are some shadowy smaller squid figures gives the photo a greater sense of depth of field. The shadowy squid figures also allude to the ink that squids emit when they are spooked. The circular shadows in the background, remind me of the sun reflecting on the water’s surface.
· Biographical/Technical:
“Squids 1”, 1990
Gelatin-silver print mounted on aluminum
40x30inches
Kunie Sugiura
There was no further information on the photogram or any similar photograms in the book.
· Objective Observations:
Black and white photogram. A positive print. Same plant type as in the previous image. Plants are facing opposite direction as previous image – the blooms are on the “top” and “bottom” of the image, with the stalks and leaves in the center. This image also has strong verticals. Portrait-style orientation.
· Subjective Thoughts:
There appears to be another attempt at melding the top and bottom stalks into single stalks that spans across the vertical axis of the image – creating a sort of hybrid plant that has no beginning and that grows outward from the center. The way the stalks and leaves converge together in the center of the image starts to make a sort of heavy mass of plants that is such a stark contrast to the very delicate flowers that bell outward on the top and bottom edges of the image. This tangled mass gives me some anxiety as it appears in such a confusion compared to the simplicity of the belled flowers.
· Biographical/Technical:
“Stacks Lillies A2 Positive 3”, 1996
Unique gelatin-silver print
40x30inches
Kunie Sugiura
This is a photogram of a photogram, touch is essential here: just as the flowers were touching the original paper to create the original image, the original image had to touch this paper to create this positive, the attempt at a geometrical arrangement of the flowers alludes to the predictable geometric petal patterns
Objective Observations:
A black and white photogram. Imagery of plant stalks with leaves and flowers blooming from them. The flowers converge in the center of the image from the “top” and “bottom” of the image. A positive of the photogram. Strong vertical emphasis. Portrait-style orientation.
· Subjective Thoughts:
The very delicate flower petals are a nice contrast against the bold leaves. The flowers meet in the center of the vertical and attempt to connect the top stalk from the bottom stalk – forming a continuous vertical that is drawn across the canvas. Though the leaves are quite bold, they still begin to be drowned out of the light of the background. As the stalks touch, I feel as if they are embracing each other, unwilling to let go. This is interesting to me, as I assume that these stalks are cut and they soon on their way to deterioration. The plants are somehow aware of this, and spend their final moments embracing. They will be represented and remembered this way, before fading into the light.
· Biographical/Technical:
“Stacks Lillies A2 Positive 3”, 1996
Unique gelatin-silver print
40x30inches,
Kunie Sugiura
This is a photogram of a photogram, touch is essential here: just as the flowers were touching the original paper to create the original image, the original image had to touch this paper to create this positive, the attempt at a geometrical arrangement of the flowers alludes to the predictable geometric petal patterns

· Objective Observations:
This image is black and white. This is imagery of flowers, stems, and leaves. This is a photogram. Some plants are overlapping. The plants are in a spherical/spiraling shape. The tones of the background are varying/inconsistent. The stems of the plants are very long and then. This is a negative. Portrait-style orientation.
· Subjective Thoughts:
This image appears to be shot from below, looking upward, though that is unlikely because it is a photogram. The background reinforces that idea, as it looks like clouds in a sky. The faux vantage point causes the viewed to feel as if they are lying on the ground, looking up at the sky. The muted blacks, whites, and grays convey a strange mood to a normal colorful view. By leaving the image as a negative, the flowers glow against the background and have an ethereal feel to them.
· Biographical/Technical:
“Rose Veins 2”, 1990
Unique gelatin-silver print mounted on aluminum
40x30inches
Kunie Sugiura
The cut flowers are transformed into garbage, and they are a symbol of time, we are forced to think about the struggle between what is being represented as “now” and “forever”, and what is no longer
Library Assignment Journal (Thais)
Image 1: Everyday dada (book) , Photographer: Sian Bonnell
Objective observations:
- daylight
- view: from up to down
- color: cool colors palette
- diagonals
- large aperture
- toast on the ground in the place of floor tiles
- white toast and wheat toast create a checkerboard pattern similar to the old black and white tile pattern
How does the observations lead to how I interpret the photograph:
- The fact that toast is on the ground makes me think something’s not right here. Surreal comes to mind, and the diagonal angles create a creepy even more surreal mood. Also, my mind goes to the retro black and white tile pattern for kitchen floors. So this photograph is referencing reality but giving it a twist of crazyness. It could feel like you are in an odd dream where you are starving so your whole house turns into food! Or something like that…
Research: - Dada was an art movement in response to WWI. The Dada artists believed that the reason and logic of burgeois capitalist society had led to the war, so their art rejected logic and embraced chaos and irrationality.
So why is Sian Bonnell rejecting logic in the 21st century? Was she speaking against the War in the Middle East?
http://www.dewilewispublishing.com/PHOTOGRAPHY/DADA.html
So according to this site the artist is “reconstructing the home environment”. She feels life is full of absurdity so she uses dada to illustrate this.
Image 2: Laura Letinsky - Untitled, #10
Series: Alone, Somewhere , Book: Now Again
objective observations:
- subdued color palette
- a lot of texture
- empty containers
- eaten fruit
o or – leftovers of fruit
- neutral background
- crumbs of bread
- diagonals
- things almost falling off the table
how that influences my read:
- feeling that something has happened here
o because of the empty containers with traces of a liquid of some sort
o because of the eaten fruit
o because of the wrinkled table cloth
§ signs of use
o bread crumbs
It actually feels like people totally went at the orange and the juice with no mercy like they were starving or completely into the oranges.
This has a feeling of eating in abundance without worries.
Can I say – even animalistic?
Whatever it is, “abundance” is shown and “aftermath”
Research:
Laura references Flemish still-life paintings. She mimicked the way that Flemish paintings show fruit at various stages of being ripe.
Image 3: Laura Letinsky - Untitled #38
Objective:
- pink
- red
- yellows, other warm colors
- all warm colors pretty much
- different textures
o wood
o metal
o cloth
o ceramic
o gritty bread and orange textures
o A LOT of detail
Beyond: This one is more chaotic than Untitled #10, and it makes me think of the immense detail that Flemish had, like those I Spy books people had as kids. I wonder if she’s using red and pinks to imply something since red is such a powerful color. I wonder if the paintings used red for a specific reason.
*Oranges are a sign of wealth! Is Laura talking about wealth or just referencing a custom in Flemish paintings?
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Image 4: Laura Letinsky - Untitled, #114
Observation:
- cool colors – grays, blues, blacks
o muted colors
- awkward angles
- diagonals
- people-less
- furniture-less
- marks of furniture on the carpet
- now drapes or blinds on windows
beyond the objective:
- feeling of empty
- feeling of – someone was living here before
- the marks left from the furniture make you thing someone or a group of people lived here and then left
- the open windows with no blinds add to the feeling that people left after inhabiting this space for a while
o I say a while because their furniture was there long enough to leave imprints on the carpet
- the colors and lighting together add to the feeling of emptiness on a psychological level
- and the awkward angles and diagonals make this image a little creepy or unsettling
I suppose that like her series with food, she is also exploring the phenomenon of the aftermath in this series of spaces.
Research:
These rooms are of recently vacated houses. MEGAN THIS IS SO YOU!!!!!!!!
The description of these images talked about homes as “shells”.
Through these images Laura wants us to bring in our own memories of spaces we occupated in our life. I suppose she is giving us a blank canvas to imagine in.
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Image 5:
Laura Letinsky
Untitled #106
Objective observations:
- cool colors
o blues
o turkoises
o greens
o violets
o and maybe red violet
- soft light
- very vertical
- perpendicular lines
- no wall paper
- no decorations in this environment
- everything in this home/space is neutral
- cloth in the room on the floor ? or tissue paper?
What the objective make me think of/feel:
- this space is very ethereal…heavenly…at the same time that it is devoid of visible human life…although there IS a chair and a basket in the far background. So there is a hint that there is someone here…The tissue paper or cloth in the room kind of freaks me out. What is that doing there? It creates a side story for me that I as the viewer have to figure out. I wonder if it’s something obvious like bed sheets that are just draping off the bed we can’t see. Or – it could be packing paper, since these photographs are about vacated homes. Still I’m not sure….but the ambiguity is wonderful. It keeps me at the photo. It’s just such a calming photo, with the soft light coming through the window gently illuminating the room on the right that I want to say is a kitchen. I want to be in that house except for that room with the cloth-tissue-bed sheet-whatever it is. Not just because of that but maybe because it is darker than the other rooms in the image. Still, it’s a turquoise, cozy type of dark…
She puts props in her photographs for us to take and use with our imagination, implanting our own past or made up story into the photographs.
“Where imagination collides with memory is always unclear territory but the two phenomena are certainly interdependent. As our minds walk down Letinsky’s empty corridors and produce narrative content, we perhaps find ourselves in the intimate space where memory, fantasy, and imagination meet.” – Karen Irvine
Library Journal Assignment
-Great lighting, nice range of midtones as well as shadows and highlights
-Nice composition- spiral staircase draws the eye around the picture plane and leads it to the middle
-Color correct, plays with warm and subtle cool tones, basically monochromatic with a few ‘pops’ of color
-Heavy geometric aspects, the checkered pattern breaks the space and the arc of the railing provides a half-frame, circle in center creates a bull’s-eye effect
-Plays with pattern, although primarily checkered they are of differing sizes and arrangements
This image was taken from a lighting book, so naturally the lighting of the image was the primary focus. However, you can see the artist’s touch in the way he chose to compose the image. The angle he chose to take this from creates an Alice in Wonderland feel- the “tumbling down the rabbit hole” effect. The checkered ground is extremely disorienting due to the play of perspective and how it appears to create a funnel. This was the tiling choice for the space, but if shot dead on I doubt the effect would be as great. This is really emphasized by the bull’s-eye in the center, which the spiral staircase leads the eye into. The angle, again, emphasizes and exaggerates the funnel feeling with the positioning of the staircase and the tilt angle of the camera. I also like the framing the arches from the upper two floors create. It is a nice separation from a believable perspective into the less plausible lower level. Lastly, the few bursts of color in the image help add interest without taking away from or overpowering the image.
-Bold colors, plays with warm and cool primary colors
-Strong geometric shapes with bold outlines
-Very graphic-design looking
-Bold lines and triangles lead viewer’s eye across picture plane
-Nice tonal range
-Different textures
This image is extremely bold and more graphic-design than photographic. It was created using polacolor film. Barbara’s composition is extremely effective in maintaining the viewer’s attention as well as leading the viewer’s eye across the entire image. The triangles, which in this case act more like arrows, point in several different directions, which really helps guide the eyes. Her use of color is amazing. The choice to use such deep and bold primary colors really paid off. The few pops of yellow framing two of the edges is especially lovely. I also love the play with texture and dimension. The shapes range from completely flat and smooth to bold three-dimensional objects with a stucco-like texture. Had it not been for the few objects with texture I would have been convinced this image was computer made. The ripple reflections also add interest to the image, they appear to be made from oscillating water even though there is no water to be seen in the image. The end result is very nice. I love that it is hard to decipher at first whether or not this is an actual photograph…. Personally I am still not entirely convinced.
-Strong geometric elements
-Bold colors
-Nice tonal range
-Plays with pattern and texture
This image reminds me of image 2. Again, it is an extremely bold piece which blurs the line between photography and graphic design. However, I am convinced this is a photograph since I can see where the vellum is folded, which I like. I feel there is an equal amount of positive and negative space, which intermingle and help create the repeating patterns. The ellipses and the scalloped edges play nicely with the bold wavering lines at the top of the image. I also really like the photographer’s choice to keep the warm yellow tone at the top of the image and the cooler blue tone towards the middle/bottom of the image. I also really like how they fade together and mingle in the blurred out wavering lines, which helps emphasize this small section of blur. The harsh lighting is really lovely, but not so harsh as to wipe out all midtones. There is still a nice range but the majority seems to be highlights and shadows. This lighting adds the graphic design feel of the image. The original is a cibachrome print, a color processing technique where the dyes are in the paper itself and are bleached out during the developing process. It would be interesting to see the two side-by-side and how the methods of printing affect the image.
-Great lighting, nice tonal range
-Basically monochromatic with a few ‘pops’ of blue
-Strong geometric elements, repeated patterns and shapes
-Plays with reflections
-Creates multiple frames within picture plane
This image is also from a lighting book, which again is very apparent based on the technical skill and focus put on the different light sources. Once again you see the artist’s hand in the way he decided to frame the shot. The play with multiple framing adds another interesting element to the image. The sculpture is subtly framed by the lighted entryway to the coffee bar, which is framed by the black tiles, which are framed by the lights and chandelier. It is a great play of light and dark, positive and negative space. He also accents the repetition of shapes in the way that he framed the image. By offsetting the center he emphasizes the rectangular elements constantly reoccurring throughout the space. (The framing he created also emphasizes this.) I also like the way he chose to play with reflections. It is slight enough to add interest without overpowering or making the space appear cluttered or too busy. Another nice touch was the play of warm and cool tones. The image is primarily a warm monochromatic image with a few pops of cool blues here and there. It really adds the welcoming feeling of this space, which I am sure they were going for.
-Strong geometric elements
-Bold use of color
-Long exposure
-Harsh lighting, primarily highlights and shadows, with few midtones
-Plays with negative space
Image 5 is a nice example of harsh lighting done correctly. The decision to keep midtones to a minimum I feel adds to the image. Again this was from a lighting book, but the choice to shoot the lighting in this way I feel was partially the artist’s decision. By doing so, it really gets the point across that this lighting is great at illuminating spaces at night, and that they are extremely effective in doing so. Had there been more midtones I feel the overall impression of this lighting would be that they were more muted and not as dramatic or powerful. I also like the way he composed the image, having the building go off in the distance, and creating an interesting shape in the upper right corner in the negative space. Also, the long exposure helped add pops of color to the image, from the deep rich blue in the sky to the red streaks caused by cars driving by. Both these red and blue tones help counter the green fluorescent looking lights coming from within the building, which would have been too much without them. There is quite a bit of negative space, but it doesn’t bother me at all. Again, I think it helps emphasize the lighting, which I am sure they were going for.